Well, I hadn’t read the other entrants, though it seems that this one is very close to the second entry. Sorry.

powerful images. great sad character in the grieving old man.

Thank you.

That last sentence left me with chills… This is excellent.

Great job! Very nice use of the eye fragment to convey a chilling reality.

Great piece. The sights and sounds are easy to imagine as the man goes through his emotional ride over losing his daughter.

Brutal little story, all the way through to the ‘accusing’ glass eye at the end. Masterful description and way of having it play out. Funny how all the entries I’ve read so far are tragic in some way. I guess we’re not fans of dolls?
LoA