Rather boring, but the idea is a really good one.

You know it is to easy to break up with people now days. Cell Phones are becomming devices of pain. Very Nice.

very callus the bf was breaking up w/ her in such a rude manner. Not very Saintly to say it was boring..
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A different style, but I thought it fit with the sort of detached unreality one can feel about such painful news. Present tense made it a bit more real, with I think only one slip into past tense.
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Sequel :-P

how rude!

by the way: “diched” should be “ditched”. (I know it’s probably just a typo, but I figured I’d point it out to you anyway.)

Mostly, it was abrupt. Felt like too much of the plot was squeezed into this one space.

Ha Ha .. yeahh this one kinda sucked.. I didn’t really put forth a good deal of effort. Oh well.. I have written far superior pieces.

what an a*ole he is. poor girl.