This was just a 10 minute quickie between classes, purposely not giving myself time to overthink it or anything…I just wanted to see what I could write out without planning and that sort of thing. So please, while I’d love to hear your thoughts and critiques, don’t be too harsh on grammar and that sort of thing.

I love dolphins! I have never thought of a zoo in such cruel terms before, I always thought they were either rescued animals or bred in captivity with no chance for wild survival, therefore justified. Anyway, nice little quick read!

Great story! I’d have never guessed that so much would have come from restraining yourself like that if I hadn’t read your own comment.

Have you ever touched a Dolphin? They feel like rubber silk, absolutely incredible. Easy read, but that’s a good thing.

You may have blurted this out real fast but I wouldn’t change anything. Looking beyond the permanent grin was very thoughtful description.

all animals deserve to be free… how would you like it being caged your whole life? How would you like it if you were in your room just chillin… then all of a sudden your in a net then taken to a cage where everyone had their faces pressed up against the glass to see the new animal? You definately wouldn’t like it would you! I love this story… it’s very touching and amazingly truthful.

This was one of those stories that touches a squishy heart like mine.
LoA