Wow no idea what to make of that but i the quirky similies (shrieking like a kid on a rickety 20th century wooden rollercoaster) and misplaced commons (Tears flowed into his ears) its profoundly fresh

A toothy ass quake - only the might of God could instill such shakes. lol The end left me wrinkle faced like I was figuring a riddle, but I stopped trying and accepted the scene for what it is - quite poetic and cool. And before I read this I was spelling sluice as sluece, so thanks for inderectly teaching me how to spell.

disregard my disregard for the rules of the crossout. Not intended.

Awesome description of launch and two distinctly different reactions to it. I’m with Matti. Wheeeeee!
LoA