Lost At Sea (feedback urgently needed)

Welcome to Lost at Sea, _.
We are located on a tiny island in the deep blue _Ocean,
Unnoticed by those of prominence.
But oh, what a pleasure to be at Lost at Sea!
We wander and roam and drift
Searching for something of fulfillment,
Something to make us worthy of praise.
Visit our Reflection Pond; seek your identity.
Indulge in weekly roaming sessions
In the great land of Yourself.
Enjoy an evening of soul searching.
Attempt to find yourself.
But there’s one catch.
Once you enter Lost at Sea,
You may never leave.

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