… No.
This is impossible to both read and take seriously as an attempt at a ficlet.
Sensible punctuation, non-credibility-smashing spelling, reasonable formatting, and proper capitalization might have helped… but it looks like you just didn’t care.

I think,White Hat that she just had to type all of it down before it al ran out her head!

You’re really starting to you piss me off.

Giving advice is one thing but the way you out it is just like a fricking douche.

DOUCHE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!