Woah.

Great little moment in time, urgency, doubt, suspense, danger, bad memories…all wrapped around just enough sci-fi lingo to let us know what the situation is all about in this reality.
LoA

and yeah, whoa.

whoa…that was really good.

I love this, Will. I think this is the first ficlet that’s inspired me to write a *quel.

There are some fascinating descriptions here. “10 seconds from losing your shoulder…” Ha.

I could learn much here. The immediacy. The moment.

Great job. I might just have to muck it up with a continuation.