Some really lovely images here. I especially liked:

Her maple eyes hold both mystery and history.

You’ve got a few minor spelling mistakes, nothing major. I find it helps to have spell check on when I’m writing. Right click with your mouse to set that on.

Very nice, with sort of a ‘Toy Story 2’ feel to the moral of the story. Really, just nice that it’s not all creepy and stuff.
LoA