Comments on The screams could be heard all the way down the corridor. by Kimball Kinnison

One Time, One Chance

Daryl.. oh i love that name.
very mysterious, makes the reader want to know so much more.=]
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:19:24.
Lone Writer

OTOC is right!
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:19:24.
Lone Writer

OTOC is right!
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:19:24.
Lone Writer

OTOC is right!
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:19:24.
Lone Writer

Sorry about that! ^
Computer broke.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:19:24.
Kermitgorf

very intense and mysterious and descriptive of the boy. you should write a sequel.
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:19:24.