I edited long after I submitted this piece of…work (cough). I think I’m finally ready to stop obsessing over it.

I think it’s awesome great job, very scary.
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Shudder I hate snakes. Well done describing the cobra emerging from poor dead Jimmy. This one is definitely creeptastic :)

hehe! CREEPTASTIC for sure!

This is so cool! Very good scary story! Congrats on getting featured!

That’s horrible, really, really horrible. You should be terribly ashamed…and kind of proud. ‘Good’ horror in how ‘bad’ it is. Have I contradicted myself enough? I’ll stop anyway and just say, “Awesome show, good job!”
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creeped me the hell out, and i LOVE snakes.