Woah. Typo, though? “She waited for the horror to set in”?
Woah.
Typo, though? “She waited for the horror to set in”?
Ooops! Thanks. :) Will fix now…
Yikes! This piece flows well, and I found it thrilling that she stabbed herself, I thought at first it was someone else. I guess without telling about feeling the pain, it made the story impersonal and allowed me to be surprised that it was suicide.
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