camping or Lost?.. a bad dream… the shock of waking and not in warm safe bed. I like the story you created from the photo.. its. inter… um, I mean it is intriguing and well thought out. the fan in room good twist ending, wasn’t expecting that.
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Great atmosphere! And I really like the reaching for a blanket when there isn’t one. It’s just so effective in forcing the col realization that this is not a nice place to be now. Really fits the picture as well, I think.

ah! beautiful…especially the climax!! brilliant work..

ooh, Kermit almost used the ‘i’ word. I had a little trouble following the first paragraph, but the feel is very scary and effective that way.
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