Very dark and effectively dramatic jump from the inspiration picture. Excellent imagery and parallels between emotional and physical states. I was a little unsure, and I thought for a second the lightning killed the guy, but no, the lady is dead? Neat-o keen story either way.
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Wow! A very dark and thrilling sequel. I love the role of the storm and the metaphor of the head. I am glad you sequelled, and to be of inspiration!