Wow that was fun! This is my first ficlit and I’m looking forward to coming here and contributing often.

I hope you enjoy my first try.

I think I spent too much time on it. Maybe not enough. I was just so excited to write something creative again, instead of writing a essay.

hey, you did a good job of it!
made me wonder what kind of animal we were dealing with, i’m imagining a lion, maybe?
well whatever animal you had in mind, i loved this anyway – especially how you didn’t give too much information out, which leaves the reader wanting to know more. wonderful job, especially for a first ficlet!
WELCOME TO FICLETS !

Thanks!

He’s a lemming. On the first try I went into with more detail. But it got too long. So I only mention it once in the first paragraph. I guess it’s easy to miss.

I think I’m going to like it here. Finally a community oriented site with content…

Nobody here is going to ask me to join a pirate vampire clan, are they?

Very cute, creative and well written. I caught that Cardeo was a lemming easily enough and hope to read more!

welcome joao..what a way to start!
beautiful writing..
i am new here as well..
happy writing..