omg, omgomg. i lovelovelove this! poems blow me away. i liked the repeatitiveness of the He loves me, he loves me not. He loves me, he loves me not. and then a cute little snippet of words that flowed nicely.=]

Cute beyond cute, and the repetitive phrase works perfectly with the overall theme of life and love repeating, if I got that message correctly (ie, picking up another flower akin to picking up a new romantic interest?).
LoA

pretty much, yeah. I glad I’ve impressed the best of the best. Now lets wait for the judges aka my friends

oh so true and adorable. makes me think of a certain little girl i babysit. (its her fav thing to do in the summer even though she doesnt have someone to love or not.)