…I suck at allegory?

Funny moral. cute story, snappy dialogue.

No, man, that was awesome. You might be the first entry, but I’m betting you’ll be one of the best. Great stuff!
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The moral was priceless. I love the title, too.

I like it a lot! I found myself wondering what the downfall was going to be, but I never suspected a human trap… Congratulations, 2nd place for you with a job well done. :-)
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