graphic. very good dialogue.

yes. very graphic. good diologue. and if you were trying to bold the word feel, try not putting in the word bold. just the word inside the little underscores.

Thank you for correcting me distant memories. And thank you for compliment.

that’s frightening.

Very interesting, explains why the men are immortal and adds a very sci-fi element. Cool.

I totally agree with thebetweenspace great addition to the original.