good, but at the same time it seems to broken, to choppy. i don’t know but it seems as if something is missing – that emotion perhaps – keeping it from seeing greatness.

Very funny with nice layering to it, heartbroken poem, heartbroken about the contest. Cute, in a doubly tragic sort of way.
LoA

hahahahah, brilliant idea to have them change the contest. i was in this whole serious and hopeful mood, like “i hope he wins!” and then they changed it. that was great=]