I haven’t written things like this before so I hope you like it and make a very good continuum of this story. I was thinking something like someone coming in at night like Tony or some stranger and beating her from something happening in the past.
It’s a good story idea with a lot of possibilities. The telling winds up a bit run together and matter-of-fact…more like just diving details than story telling. It’s a fine distinction but just something to work on, find more of a narrative voice. LoA
Reggie Saymine---(Say-mean)
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