Great job with the repetition at the beginning and end. I thought the gummi bear line was pretty funny too. The whole thing has a neat mixture of hope and, well, constant disappointment.
LoA

awww!!! so true, is mostly constantly disappointment

I like the change of mood from beginning, to middle, and then back to sadness at the end. I, too, appreciated the repition. Totally tied the piece together.
LoA

Awwwwww! SAD !!! BUT GREAT !

Awesome