Still can’t get a handle on your style, but the story is still quite fun.
LoA

ooo creepy…

ooo creepy…(hey, i am echo after all…)
this is getting…gwud.
LoA

lol. i like the combat boot thing if i know where you’re going.

oy… that guy definitely doesn’t sound promising

lol you sent telepathic brains to the guy? ha no wonder he didn’t want them :P Watch out for typos (eg. ‘I hat[e] high school’ ‘then [a ]stranger entered’)