Ooh, I like the twist to it. From friend to foe in the mysterious gentleman? Fun addition to the series, and really, aren’t mysterious guys always trouble? Heck, even us obvious guys are trouble most of the time.
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oo nice twist ya got going on. like how you described jenny as normal. can’t wait to see how jenny knows whats going on with kamaria…
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i like the twist too, wasn’t expecting that. althou i guess that’ swast a twist is…
can’t wait to see wat happens next!!

lol to Thx, yes, I do believe they are. and I agree about the nice little twist. It’s nice to see you incorporate different accents into the story :)