this is good! It is true to! We are the like the hawk not only destroying what gives us substance, but always searching for something that will totaly fill us. Don’t we all look for love like the hawk looks for food?

This is a great metaphorical ficlet. I’ve been trying to write better metaphors and I think I have an idea of how after reading this. Thanks for the inspiration.

Wow.
Very Thoughtful!

Awesome metaphoric read! Of course, it was the Hawk in the title that drew me in….LOL. I found it to be wonderfully written. Great work!

LoA

amazing.. very good story about life. Good metaphor. You use it well. This story has a very powerful message. You engage the reader with a tale of a hawk and mouse.. And that’s where the simplicity ends. I like how the story switches tones in the middle.
Bravo!

Wowzers, This really makes you think. I love how you put the message into a story.