sounds promising. sequel, please? ^^
very well written. i like how you don’t explain right away.
The setup here is one that deals with time, going back and forth, which is a great way to structure a story. I want to read more, even though it seems to end in tragedy I’m hoping there’s some sunshine in store too. Good start.
I like how you set it up and don’t end it right away. nice job!
NightMaiden
NightMaiden
Tad Winslow
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