Wow, startling and disturbing first foray into the world of ficlets. Great start, and a chilling idea—an amnestic way to meet one’s end, I’m assuming. Brutal and effectively told.
LoA

but wasn’t all our 1st fictlest rivitingly original, with amazingly ingaging plots? haha great start….!!

I appreciate all your kind words. I’ve actually been thinking more about this plot… If no one has any ideas for continuing the story, I believe I have a way of making this story slightly more interesting.

It would take a slightly sci-fi direction, but I don’t see a problem with that…. what do you guys think?