That was pretty good. It was suspenceful, it had drama, and it has me waitin gof the rest of the story!!!

todd. :( im sorry

Ooh, I’ve seen this situation before, or something like it in real life. Good job with the tension between the two and also suggesting more details to the story than we can see here. Also, nice touch putting it in the digital age with the AIM mention.
LoA

It was really good… I loved the tension I felt when I was reading it. I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more…

heyyy i remember reading that convo on AIM ! (: sorry i just needed to feel important. anyways, we need the end of the end !

who is this about?

This is the begining of the end.

I’m guessing you deleted the story. Hence the name.