I liked this quite a bit. I sequeled, just to let you know. Not like it’s worth reading.
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I ask myself that rather a lot. I love the dichotomous nature of this. Beautifully done.

thanks for the comments guys. i wrote this in third grade so its not really good.

In the third grade? That kicks major butt for third grade. Heck, it’s better than my poems in junior high that got me sent to the guidance counselor. Thanks for sharing.
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lol i guess. thanks (:

lol… it is really good…

Wow. ‘Tis awesome.

thankss