I like the cuteness of this story. I think it is all in line with a very young pup “His cape was ripped”, oh my!!
The difficulty I had was that is just wasn’t that developed. The burglary, then reflection back to earlier, then case and chasing a bone thief, then a city caped crusader… it was too short for that many jumps.
I loved the pic and the story you could develop from this, Keep up the good work.
Susan Holder is terrific