wow. beautiful imagery p. flower. beautiful….
LoA

aaya i want to know what’s going on!! waahh, please sequel!

I love it! sequel?

It was good how you kept the readers up to date with Aedin’s facial expressions, ‘cause it makes it more real and gives room for speculation :) also, 6th line from the bottom, first word: I think you meant ‘where’ and not ‘were’.