Nice! This is really really good! I love the last line, brought the whole thing together!

Very nice. I can tell this is a healing thing for you. I enjoyed the rhyme and near-perfect rhythm.
LoA

Wow, this is really nice. Good job! I love how well it flows!

wow. awesome repition. i loved the feel and the passion mixed in it…
LoA

This is really good. The rhythm is perfect and the vibe it gives you as you read from line to line
5stars

I LOVE IT .
It conveys so much feeling.
awesome repitition.
You are a great writer.
5 stars all the way.
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wow, I LOVE it