Very Interesting. A sequel would be nice.
LoA

I like that it stays vague enough that it could be some horrible post-apocalyptic, bombed out city…or it could be modern day Los Angeles. I wasn’t sure if some aspects were the character’s unique voice or just typo type stuff. But it still reads very gritty and authentic.
LoA

The typo-ish stuff is most definately the character’s slang-ish way of talking. But as for whether it’s post-apocalyptic or modern day LA, I think I’ll just keep you all guessing. For now, at least. =]