Here’s a challenge – this story has 18 lines and 18 words in the first line. The second line has 17 lines, the third 16 and so on all the way to the last line of one word. The story also achieves “ficlet nirvana.” It was challenging, but fun.

Terrific way to tell a story! I love the way you count down the words in each line, and still manage to tell a cohesive narrative! Well done!

This is fantastic! i praise you on completing that challenge.. it would take me ages to be able to figure something like that out!!

That’s quite a challenge there. Man… I’m impressed as hell at how you kept the narrative in an even stricter limitation than length. Amazing!

Bloody hell this is hard. My brain hurts.

Ok, sequelled. Damn hard one man. I need to go play Mario or something and give my brain a break.