Funny little battle of sequels you have here, Stovo turning the situation dire, and you finding a way out. Can’t wait to see which of you wins. Very dramatic and very ‘action movie’, with the hero ‘incapacitated’ but still fighting through it to save the day.
LoA

ouch, sounded lik it hurt!

you repeated arm a lot at the beginnning, but otherwise, a very good ficlet.