Comments on The Song of My Doubtful Heart(Places of My Mind Catena) by nesdil

nesdil

Sorry about posting twice..I forgot to put it as a sequel to Pierced By the Cold Shards of Love(Places of My Mind Catena)
love4evr
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:27:27.
Korirei

Very original and has a great use of metaphor; very ingenious. Yet again I see beautiful description and great vocabulary, especially at the end where you spoke of a wondrous sound created by your tears. Yet again, it is very original, and it warmed my heart to read this. I love you, dearest.♥♥♥
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:27:27.
Billis

wow that was amazing
a beautiful poem which just speaks as if it is to the reader
luv ya
Billis
P.S. plz come on aim….. i miss u
- Posted 2009-01-12 03:27:27.