omg this story is amazing. It really pulls you in. I like it a lot. It has a sad ending though.. But not endings can be happy. You readers really feel for your character. There is an instant connection. Good choice of photo.. It grabs your attention.

thanks heaps celestic23. means a lot.

Very good story. I felt compassion for the character before finding out that the character was a murderer.

wow… that’s intense. great job, it’s so sad