oh my god. i thought tracker was going to be a character with good intentions. This is a total shock to me, but the sudden twists and turns of the story are so exciting! it’s really keeping me interested!
Oh, man. Okay, should have followed my instincts and hated Tracker from the get-go. Oh, please, please, please, tell me you’re posting more tomorrow! I must know where this is all going!
I am at a point where I will have to think. ;) I almost like this as an end. I don’t know that Dude will have the same thoughts/ personality when he wakes as he did as a fully non- mutant. This was a step into a new genre than I am accustomed to. Cap, I loved that you knew from way back something wasn’t right with Tracker, and I actually laughed out loud. I don’t know that I can save the world, so this may just be the end. ;) . I do thank you both for the absolutely wonderful comments.
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