nice. you conveyed the feelings nicely.
LoA

=/ how tragic. But I love how you put it all together, kudos.

I love this series so far. It’s so emotional but sad

ironic.. sad, tragic, emotional all apt words..

this is very realistic and true to life
its tragic and some people might pretend its not real but it is and i like that you wrote about it the way you did almost as if you were trying to get a message out there