Nice story kk, started off really well but feels, to me like you rushed the end a little, trying to get all the bits in that you wanted (tough writing with such limitations isn’t it lol) Still, very good though. S.J.
Nice story kk, started off really well but feels, to me like you rushed the end a little, trying to get all the bits in that you wanted (tough writing with such limitations isn’t it lol)
Still, very good though.
S.J.
SJHundak/S.J.Willing