aw, what happened to her? what’s gonna happen next?? keep writing, this is good stuff
LoA

i like Michelle

I keep forgetting about george’s name change. ugh. good story though.

awww, poor Michelle..
by the way, you are a FREAKIN AMAZING AUTHOR .

our independent feet took us to a familiar purlieu of ours.> that line alone is just out of this word great.