this is great! i love how you added the spanish, it gave an authentic feel to your ficlet. you’re amazing at capturing what it must be like…keep it up, moussie…
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forgot to mention- all of this from a ten year old’s perspective…wow great imaginitivity.
very touching too :)
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the best so far.. I cant picture the lil boy crossing.

wow this is so true
and incredible
this is the best confessions entry i have read so far