When I title this, I meant it a different way, but two thoughts do occur to me. One, this is about as far as I’d figured the story. Two, this does make for a neat launching point (well, I think so anyway). Now, I don’t ask this lightly, but would anyone like to jump in? I think I’ve left a lot of options open with a good number of at least somewhat described characters (ie, What has Oim done with Steve the Brahgus and Chloe the Girlfriend? Where are the other demigobs?). Eh, so, there it is. The end?
I really enjoyed the whole story up till here… I will give my creative glands time to secrete and see what I can come up with. Oh well, on to stovehobo’s sequel
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