woww, this is good. :)

gracias! I.D. tee hee, i’mma call you ID from hereon out!! declared from imaginary mountain top

This is good. You should totally keep going….

Chilling and dark vision of the future. Now we get to see a suicidal guy fight for his life? The paradox is too amusing. Very well written and welcome back to the ficleting world.
LoA

I enjoyed this story – the ways that it could go forward and back are legion. Please write some more of it