Excellent writting of what is happening in the world today. But lets not forget that as the decaying of the world happends so is the fall of man and it is just another step to His return.

I really like the first stanza of this. Sometimes it can be damaging to a poem when you have to find rhymes, but the way you used “chores” really works, being that some people find religion to be bothersome rather than something voluntary and enlightening (“overly concerned with not getting burned”!). Great job :)