Funny dialogue with a ba-dum-bum ending! Loved it.
I’ve decided that Mark and Seb are my de facto characters for conversation between two guys about… well, about anything.
great witty dialogue.. reminds me of the guys on the brit com Coupling, what they would say and do.
“That’s two taboos in one shot, that is – asking a girl out at a funeral, and asking her out while she’s at work.” And at his mother’s funeral. Hat trick!Great job! Off to read the sequel.
My favorite- “Personally, I’m of the opinion that so long as it’s not her funeral, you’re basically alright.â? Great job! :)
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