Great job integrating the vampire myth into the Vietnam grittiness. Great ender there, very telling of how things are going for the poor guy.
Awesome. I felt like I was there.
That was great! Off to read pt.2. :DLoA
This is cool, lets see what’s next
THX 0477
Dave
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