Comments on Tortured soul by horrorfan13

Dani H. Mefel

I like it, it sounds eerie but flows and I love eerie. It sounds good and by the looks of it maybe writing could be your thing, I’m still deciding well then again I’m still young. Maybe you’d wanna read some of my stuff and see if writing is my thing. Look up Hospital Bed, if you want.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:09.
MissJonas1492

WOW .! THIS ONE IS TOTALLY GREAT ! I LOVE THE FIRST TWO LINES ! THEY R AWESOME ! KEEO UP THE GREAT WORK !
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:09.
Dangerous Angels

“You will see how my life has led me to this: This room, these clothes, this hat. Such a sad, sad existence.”

I really like this part. The 1st time I read it I read it as if his existence is sad, because he had a bad fashion sense, so it mad me laugh.

But job well done, keep up the good work. lol
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:09.
Saint Chuck

Wow, utterly, eerily beautiful. Lovely in a slightly twisted way.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:09.
Saint Chuck

Wow, utterly, eerily beautiful. Lovely in a slightly twisted way.
- Posted 2009-01-12 02:31:09.