Ooh..

A jailbird, is he??

I like the little coffee-blood to oil-water thing. very creative.

Nice twist.
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I could nave never come up with that.

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oh i lik the part when he says that all he needs is his prescription, it was so sad/cute. i no it doesn’t make much sense, but still

Great job transitioning from his detached coffee thoughts, to how he needs his prescription, and then coming fully to grips with the situation that he could go back to jail.
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wow… intense.. full of anger,, wonder what he did, something vilolent no doubt.

Engaging from the start – intense and full of possibilities. Well done, friend!

Very nice continuation of Wil’s story. Nicely done!

Fantastic!

Jail, eh? Nice.

Just give him his meds. Now.

That was gayful.

whoa, why was he in jail the first time!? sequel!
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Nice descriptions! :)

Whoa, nice sequel! I love the random thoughts at the beginning, and the little jail twist at the end.