Nice double-use of the line. Glad I could be of help. ha. It was very funny, my favorite line was about the bowels, that and the finale.

I liked it. Well written!

Very nice.

It made me smile!

Very odd, almost Monty Python-esque in its absurdity.
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Very odd, almost Monty Python-esque in its absurdity.
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Very odd, almost Monty Python-esque in its absurdity.
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Very odd, almost Monty Python-esque in its absurdity.
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Very odd, almost Monty Python-esque in its absurdity.
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Very odd, almost Monty Python-esque in its absurdity.
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Hey cool story.. I like the dialouge. The character has interesting dialect. Thumbs up!

What the hell happened here? Did THX drop an Absurd bomb?

I agree with THX . Very Python-esque. Great job!