whats so bad about “there”??
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This was a bit jarring reading on from the prequel. I felt a bit lost at first. I got it in the end though :)

Like Melia, I got where the entry ended up, but was confused initially. “His mouth tasted like poo” was probably my least favorite moment.

Yeah, I didn’t like the poo either, it’s fuzzy now!! LOL Thanks for the feedback!!

And where, exactly, is here, I’m wondering? What will happen to poor Wallace next? Or do we want to know?
Yes, we do!

I like the rewrite… Fuzzy works much better.

:-) Much

WHERE ?!!