Great story. A tragic ending.

Wow! Very nicely done.

How sad. Wound a bit rushed, but still a good job getting in a good, atmospheric description and then still getting to the meat of the matter.
LoA

I’m going to be all… insightful(?) for a moment.
I think that this is really good because just the night before their daughter was killed but since everyone reacted the same way that the narrorator did, no one knew. It’s sad if you think about it. =(